Monday, March 30, 2020
Derailed train
In my writing, I set a scene about a spooky ghost train. Do you have a story about a ghost?
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Oh my gosh Indi! What happened in 1911?? You have me on the edge of my seat. Well done using the Think 6 model when writing your blog post.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Indigo
ReplyDeleteWhat exciting language you used in this writing. I loved the simile you used, 'screaming like toddlers'! That really captured my attention. Fabulous job including a picture. I don't have any good ghost stories but I'd love to read more of yours.