Hey, everybody today I'm going to tell you a story about Little Red Riding Hood. This is a fractured Fairy Tale that I have written in Literacy, it is not quite finished yet, but I have put a lot of effort into my writing. I hope you enjoy it! Have you read about Little Red Riding Hood?
Friday, August 21, 2020
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Kia ora Indigo
ReplyDeleteI love your fractured fairytale so far. I can't wait to hear what happens next. I can help you with some editing Indy, come and ask me.! Keep up the great work.
Ms Catton
Kia ora Indigo,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you have used the word vibrant instead of bright to make it more descriptive. I can't wait for the full story and what comes after the first part. Good job it's really cool. I will defiantly come and read another blog post of yours soon especially if it's literacy based work.
Kia ora Indigo
ReplyDeleteI really like to story so far.
Bye